Hello Boys and Girls,
You seem to really be enjoying The Island trilogy that Mr. Jennings is reading to you. How would you end the third book? What would happen to J.J. and the other kids left on the island?
Please make sure your response includes at least 6 good sentences.
I would have J.J's dad pay millions of dollars to the smugglers,so he could get his son back. Then J.J would tell his dad that the other kid are still stranded at the island,and about Will with the infection. Then his dad would call for rescuers to go to the island and save the kids. They would take Will into the hospital so they could try to save his leg. So they save Will's leg.Then they could all get reunited with their families and they get to be best of friends.
ReplyDeleteThe way I would end island. J.J’s dad would pay for J.J . Then they would send planes to save the rest . Nobody would have to cut will open because will would get operated . Luke would find who put the gun in his locker after that Luke wouldn’t be in trouble anymore. Mr. Ratford would get arrested for living kids on a ship by them selfs.
ReplyDeleteWhat I think is going to happen is J.J.'S father is going to go and get him. Soon after that J.J. tells his father about the bom and the smuggelers. J.J. also tells his father about lisa,Will,Ien,Luke,and carla how they are traped on the island. Jonithan lane sends help to the islad. At the island everybody is worried J.J. has not made it. They almost decided to operate on will. When they see a plane in the sky it lands on their isand. people come out to give the kids medical care. They also give surgery to will. Everybody returns home safely. As for the smuggelers they get put in jail for life.
ReplyDeleteThe others find a trap door that leads into an under water cave. In the under water there is a submerin in it. Luckly Ian watched a tv show on how to drive a submerin. Ian pilots the submirin and they run into a navy ship and they tell them who they are. They find J.J. and the smugglers. The smugglers get excicuted. And every body goes home. Fin
ReplyDeleteIf i were writing this book i would...... make JJ get safely with the smugglers. JJ would tell everyone but no one would believe him,this made JJ mad,this made him ferrous,he wanted to be right for once,this was his time!!!! JJ said if no one is going to believe me, i will have to do it my self.~JJ~
ReplyDeleteIt had been their time limit,they were going to cut Will open,they had no more hope in JJ. Will had been in comma for all this time now,Lisa knew it was time although she would not amendment it.
While they are going to cut will open, JJ is still trying to find a way to save then although the others...... they have no clue whats going on! Oh oh JJ gets sent to a mental hospital because everyone thinks he has gone crazy, even JJ's dad!!!!
They cut will open still having no hope, but worth the shot, nothing can get any worse right, they all THOUGHT!
The next morning the smugglers show up unexpectedly, they were unprepared Will had not even finished his surgery yet.
JJ was on the summugglers plane again,with supplies for a lot of ,food,water,medicare, but its to late Will's gone.
They do get busted off the island,rat-face was back.Back for more say,yes back for more. Rat-face decided to come and save the rotten kids,get rich,and kill them. He took the smugglers plane home with the kids and the SMUGGLERS, he is just the soooooooooooooooooooo big hero!
YEAH right guys....... NO!!!! the kids return home, without Will. Rat-face takes credit for it....NO again. the kids prove Rat-face wrong , and they all came good friends, and maybe just maybe Will wakes up on the island with no one there!!!!!!!!!!! ~Jeannie~
The way I would of ended the island series is that Luke,Charla,Will,Ian,and Lyssa found a transceiver and tried to call the air force. In the mean while J.J. would have been hostage. When they found the transceiver they realized it wouldn't work because something else is already transcending from another transceiver on the island.In the mean time J.J. held as hostage finds passage way out.While they search for what blocking the connection they stumble across a timer which tells when Junior is getting detonated. As they do this J.J calls the marines to save them on the island. That is how I would of ended the island the series.
ReplyDeleteMr. Big came to Mean and Meaner and whispered something to Mean. "J.J.," Mr. Big said calmly, "you know about the bomb do you?"
ReplyDelete"Yes." J.J. replied.
"I'm sorry, I can't let you go." said Mr. Big
"Oh," J.J. said, disappointed.
"I'm giving you one more chance to tell me the truth - who were the survivors with you?" Mr. Big said.
"No one Sir." J.J. said, trembling in fear of death.
"I'll see you tomorrow, then." Mr. Big said, and dropped something as he walked out.
"A file!" J.J. thought, as he looked more closely. "Ok Sir," he said out loud to Mr. Big.
10:40pm
J.J. broke through the bar covered window and ran to the runway. He jumped in the plane. He looked at the controls. "How hard could it be?" he thought to himself, "it's like flying in the movies, right? They even left the key!"
"Start engine - check!
Flying plane - not check."
J.J. felt afraid. But he knew he had to try anyway, and so he released the brake, sat in the pilot's chair, and hoped that all of the blinking lights would be self-explanatory.
3 hours later
There it is! The Island was in sight.
All the others agreed... "WILL!" Everyone jumped in surprise. It was Lessa,she was shaking Will constantly. "Calm down Lessa,It's going to be OK"said Luke calmly. "Guy's,the smugglers!"yelled Carla. " Wait that's J.J, He's screaming" I DON'T NO HOW TO LAND!!"
12:34am
He did it!he landed!" " Guy's, get in the plane!"13 hours later.
YES! We made it" "WE better get to the hospital before Will doesn't make it." exclaimed Lessa.
2 HOURS LATER
"Hey Lessa, get out of my face" "Will you made it!!" Well I hope I see you again.Some day. We split up, and we'll never forget our friendship. EVER.
I would make them have to operate on Will,but it doesn't work. They have to cut off Wills leg. JJ's father pays the ransom. When they get to the island the smugglers are already there. They threaten the survivors at gun point. When the SWAT team gets there the smugglers are arrested and sent to jail. When they reach land they arrest Mr.Radford for leaving them behind.
ReplyDeleteThe way i think the story ends.JJ woald tell meaner to let hem go.Meaner and JJ are going to sneak out. It was at the middle of the night.They took all of the food, supplies,and lots of thengs. They ran outside got in the air- plain. JJ asked Meaner 'why are you coming' In replied"nothing".JJ toled hem go to the island. Meaner asked "WHY" JJ cried "nothing". When they got to the island the rest of the kids came running chering.JJ toled them quitly he was Meaner. JJ toled Meaner to take them home. When they got there meaner toled the about the boam and ather stuff. Everyone was happy to see their familys. Juan
ReplyDeleteHow would I end the island book? Well J.J.'s dad would pay millions for J.J.. Once he got him back, J.J. told his dad that the other kids were still on the island. So his dad would send recuers to find them. Once they got to the island the rescuers found that the smuglers had all the other kids on the island. The smugglers only released Will so his leg could be fixed but then agreeed to give back the kids but with a catch. The catch was that they had to have the bomb. And then all the police came and arrested them.
ReplyDeleteI would make JJ escape from the smugglers.When he escapes he tells about the other kids on the island.The kids on the island are rescued and Will is brought to a hospital.The smugglers never got caught.Radford got arrested for leaving the kids to die.The air force rediscovered the bomb
ReplyDeleteI think the story on island would have a nice ending like this.
ReplyDeleteOne of mr. bigs workers said hey Mr. Big, the kid knows, so we shouldnt ransome him we should kill him. Very well we shall kill him at once dont let him escape! Now be gone with you! JJ over heard those fatal words...
JJ had to react quick, when Mr. bigs worker came him, he reacted quickly to the gun, he side stepped, elbowed him in the stomach, then elbowed him in the back of his neck, then he was unconsious. JJ pulled out the mans gun knowing he would need it to get past the others.
Lissa was staring at Will and was praying that JJ would make it back. Luke,Ian, and Carla were on 24/7 watch for the skys, there goal was to see a plane, and so far nothing.
JJ scurried through the building looking for anything a emergency door, or even a window!
JJ looked around then he found a window, he knew he had to be quiet, but there was no time for that sooooo... CRASH! JJ tackled the window. Owww, He ran for the forest. Im gonna make it! Im gonna make it! Then he saw a camo jeep with guards in front of it. Im not gonna make it! Im not gonna make it! Wait I have a gun he shot one of the men and kept on running.
Luckily they fell for his plan they went over to help the man and JJ got scot-free.
To speed this up JJ got away and told the police, the smugglers got arrested and they rescued the others!
THE END.
I would end the story like this. The smugglers are about to kill J.J because he knows about the bomb. Then the army came. They had traced the email to J.J's dad to the smuggler's hideout. They arrested the smugglers and J.J told them about his friends on the island but they don't believe J.J and sent him home. The others on the island then operate on Will. They fail to save him. Then they spend the rest of their lives on the island.
ReplyDeleteI think JJ and the other kids will leave the Isalnd on time at exactly one month. How they leave is the smugglers will take care of the kids because they think they're are inisit. At the end Will is all better and they all become best friends and will never forget each other. Then I think there will be a little paragraph of what each of the kids are going to do. Like, Will becomes a doctor, Lisa becomes a nurse,Carla becomes a vet,JJ becomes a superstar,Luke becomes a pilot,and Ian becomes a captain. That's what I think is going to happen at the end of the Island book.
ReplyDeleteThis is the way I will end the story. First, JJ will escape from the smugglers. After he escapes, he runs into a police. JJ tries to talk to the police, but the police only speak Chinese. Luckily, he found a translator and finally they went to the island. However when JJ and the rescuers got there, but the kids on the island wasn’t there. Where they were on the lifeboat in the ocean, they thought that JJ was died. Luckily a sub found them and they all got rescue. They found out JJ was alive and they all meet in Hawaii. After that, JJ’s father invited them all home, and shortly they all went home. Mr. Radford got arrested and was thrown into jail. The smugglers was hang, and when Luke found out his friend put the gun in his locker, his friend had to go on a different boat trip and got shipwreck and didn’t make it. All the kids lived happily. This is how I ‘m going to end it.
ReplyDeleteI would think that J.J might get killed by the smuggler but they got a message. When they saw the message they did not kill J.J. Instead they tied him up and threw him in a room with captain. J.J. just remember that he had the card. When they cut rope they saw a hammer and bang them in the head. After that they went to J.J. father's place an ask them for help. When they found his friend, he treat them well and live happily ever after.
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